Twinkling Starz

Good work, I really like it. Very beautiful and sad. The fourth stanza doesn't have much rhythm, by the way. -*Twinkles

Very dramatic and it showed your feelings well. It could have used a rating as well.

You're okay. Nice poem. It would really help the depressed person.

I really like this poem, I loved the melt it back to life line. Very good. I agree with Triona, maybe removing 'with your song' would make it sound better. ...

Wow, this is a great poem. It really had good imagery and I loved it. Good work. -*Twinkles

Very nice, I think it showed your feelings very well. Some of the spelling and grammar mistakes make it hard to read the poem, though. Good work. -*Twinkles

I like it, but it was too dull and bland. It didn't have any rhythm with it, they were just words on a piece of paper. Editing will do some ...

Good, there aren't any mistakes. I like it.

Wow, very emotional.

Awesome. I love Green Day!

Good work, I see it really did pour out of you.

Nice, not fabulous, but okay. I like the last stanza, it closed the poem up quite well. Some others come to the rescue and mend the broken glass until each ...

Em, his grammer and English is okay, I don't see anyhting wrong. Good work, zackrouda, the details are wonderful and I really like this poem. Keep up the good work!

Wow, this is a wonderful poem. I like the last stanza, great ending, I love it. You should put a rating on this, it warns people. Very good! The first ...

It's not absolutely wonderful, but nice. I like the fact that you mentioned many colors in the poem, it gave more detail. I really like the last stanza. Good ending. ...